Saturday, December 8, 2012

Fallen Comments

Rating: 4.0

The first time I saw you, I did not quite understand…
When you said that you were not from this land
You were nothing like I've ever seen
At first I thought you were just a dream
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Renee Maritz
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White Tiger 14 March 2018

Beautifully written with very nice imagery. Well done. 10+++

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 June 2016

Everyone and everything are always against our love But then again it's because you are a blessing from above So I'll keep fighting till the very end Because you're my love - my angel - you are my best friend - - -the last stanza is a crowning of the poem...... stand firm, in determination.... firm like a rock to be in love with the one who touches your heart........ love your poem. tony

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 09 December 2012

An interestin poetic love poem. Kudos for a unique way of presenting it. Do read my latest too. :)

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 08 December 2012

its a beautiful love poem......... good poetic heart.. read mine.... i will give you a vote..

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