Fall When Felt Unfair Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Fall When Felt Unfair

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Autumn came to dare,
To leave the trees leafless bare,
Poor fall, blamed unfair.
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Haiku |10.08.2019|
Topic: fall, trees, grey, green

Saturday, March 7, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: autumn,fall,green,trees
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It all started by autumn. The blame came squarely on fall.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 07 March 2020

Awesome haiku. Loved it. Thanks.

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Aniruddha Pathak 08 March 2020

My first comments were not registered, but let me thank you dear poet.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 March 2020

Wonderful creation Beautiful haiku. Autumn is well presented. Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 07 March 2020

It is when a poem is liked we know, it has reached the right address, thanks

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Kostas Lagos 07 March 2020

Clever writing! Love it!

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Aniruddha Pathak 08 March 2020

Clever perhaps when the flavour is agreeable. Thanks

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Aniruddha Pathak

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Godhra - Gujarat
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