Wednesday, February 25, 2009

Fall To Rise Comments

Rating: 5.0

I recalled those days
When time was right
When going was smooth
When dreams were big
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Kranthi Pothineni
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rago rago 15 May 2009

amazing lines.......falling was to rise......beautiful lines to ponder on........see my 10+++

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Janell Cressman 10 March 2009

Wow another great poem. it is so true some time's we need to fall befor we can rise to somthing greater. awesome job.

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Pablo Cruise 10 March 2009

I like this very much. Great heartfelt message.

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Eyan Desir 05 March 2009

good flow very poetic

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everyone has to fall before they can rise again... I believen you're writing nice work Krista

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Amy Douglass (Fifita) 26 February 2009

Well expressed. It's beautiful and very true. keep it up.

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Catrina Heart 25 February 2009

My falling was not a failure I had fallen only to rise ------- Amazing and unique ending............Great craft...10+++

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