ray Schreiber

ray Schreiber

Mechanicsburg, Pennsylvania USA
Tuesday, October 20, 2009

Fall -Tanka- Comments

Rating: 5.0

bright brittle bodies
fall away down to the ground
with brilliant colors
crazy patchwork quilting bee
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Walterrean Salley 06 January 2018

One of fall's many mysterious and interesting patterns. Beautifully done.

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Maria Barbara Korynt 29 October 2009

Very nice tanka. I like it. Maria Barbara Korynt

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Lillian Thomas 20 October 2009

Usually I don't like rhyming in the Japanese forms, but I think it works here. Very nice tanka.

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Mechanicsburg, Pennsylvania USA
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