Fall Of Troy Comments

That waswonderfully written....

Super interesting always been so interested in Greek and Roman wars this is a good writing. How did you come up with something like this genius work.

Aha greek mythology! A legendary poem presented in a fine articulate manner dat i enjoyd readin! Do coment on my new poem tmoro when i write. Wil remind u.

i am speech less..............wish one day i'll write like you sir thank you for sharing, payal

a perfect blend of words to depict a whole story in a few words. It creates a deep impression on the mind and also takes us to the world of legends, greta write :)

Hagha pa Pukhto k 6 wayi samandar de pa koza k raa ger kare...... This is one of my most favorite on poemhunter. You've gathrered the whole story in few lines. The legends are paid tributes and the poet has used all his efforts to make it sublime like the event. Ah! This sin of Paris was un-forgiven.... Marvelous imagery. For worthless love and fairy****** a lot different this time Gulsher.... Full of Allusion. Marvelous poem written in poetic language by the pride of Swat. LLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLoved it

A good write with good rhyme.

Legends and epics make a deep impression on our minds and we begin to ponder over them..... For a while we read and they we begin to learn about life in all its forms from times immemorial. It is a poem that can boast of quality diction, well blended smilies and a poetic nostalgia.

Hector, Aeneas, Paris, Agenor and Sarpedon**** Achilles, Odysseus, Ajax, Patroclus and Agamemnon***** For worthless love and fairy****** Troy lost her grace and glory........ Nicely delivered.. i liked the poem simply deliver the history of ancient Europe. it is also great lesson for every body.

A sin committed by Paris and Helen destroyed the whole Trojan nation. I like the lesson depicted in your beautiful poem

Dramatic saga so beautifully written, loved it, thanks for sharing!

Odyssey and IIyad...swirl the past hypnotizing story in modern era, a rebirth in a poetry by John..classical in digital_Soul

Well thought out and amazing how you fitted all that info onto poem structure. Clever stuff and the foot notes made all your hard work easy to access.