Fall Of Poets Comments

Ellias, I feel you are more mature than your age warrants. In this poem, I hear your exhortation to all poets and writers to wield their pen to expose the wicked faces who deceive and cheat their fellow beings, to write something about the need to stop the brutal violence, war, bloodshed etc. A war has to be waged for justice to all humanity! Lofty thoughts expressed in a powerful way! Well done! !

salam! khob.omadam nazaramo begam.mmmm....aval inke mozush ali bud v man az khundane y hamchin sheri vaghean lezzat bordam! gahi in ghaziye mano ham aziat mikone....baziya joori cheshmeshuno ro vagheiyataye jahan mibandan k engar tu inja zendegi nmikonan ya tu donya hich moshkeli nist...in taasofbare.....man fek mikonam be onvan yek ENSAN dar tule omremoon bayad ye baram shode haddeaghal baraye adamai k daran ranj mibaran y kari konim hatta dar hadde y harf....k haminam kheylia nemikonan! ! .....hala farghi nadare k to y shaeri, y naghashi, akkasi, daneshmandi ya siasatmadar....har kas tu hozeye khodesh be onvaneh y ensan in vazifaro dare....................amma..............amma in nemituneh be in mani bashe k hameye shaera bayad dar bareye moshkelat v felakat haye donya sher began faghat....az in jahat man 100% ba aghaye Nader movafegham.....honar darvagheh boruze ehsasate nakhodagahe....age in nakhodagah darbareye ensaniat nabud nemishe goft mardude! hichvakht nemishe honarmando majbur kard.....sokut kardan khub nist....ghabul.....vali man fek mikonam dar vaghe sher nab ooniye k to az ghabl barash mozu entekhab nakoni......ye ho az zehnet berize roo kaghaz....nemishe y shaero majbur kard faghat dar bareye zajre mardom benevise....garche in karborde ejtemaiye honare v kheyliam khoobe....vali man ehsas mikonam shaera gahi latif tar as inan....shaer shayad hamoon kasi bashe k vasat jang dar hali k y goloole tu sinashe ba didane y sanjaghak hameye zeshtiye in jahano tu y lahze faramoosh kone.......hichvaght nabayad ba ehsasat manteghi barkhord konim......va mishe ham vazifeye ensinimoono anjam bedim v ham sheraye dige begim...... v albate motmaennan ba in ghaziye movafegham k age y nafar vaghean ba ehsas bashe v vaghean shaer bashe momkan nist az narahatiye digaran narahat nashe...nemishe esmesho gozasht ba ehsas dar haali k faghat be ehsasat shakhsiye khodesh fek mikone....v hatta tu aasare Sohrabam esharate ziadi be ranje mardom shode....masalan ino alan yadame: ....jange naaziha ba saagheye naz.............natijatan be nazare man honar be khodiye khod arzeshmande v age dar rah armanhamoonam estefadash konim onvaght dige moghaddas mishe....v albate JAvDaN........................................................va inke az hameye ina gozashte.....man vaghean behet eftekhaaaaaar mikonam pesar! ! ! ! marekei! ! ! ! ! : D

This is a nicely written poem, showing the poet's concern for humanity and his desire (i guess) to have poets write about the world problems with the hope poets' words will help. i agree with john brown's comment that most ordinary people just want to live and let live. i am a person like that and try to have faith in the leaders of the country (my country, u.s.a.) to do the right thing, whatever that is! i also agree with Feeling sympathy behind the words. But you can't do anything to them by poems. Sina Farajzadeh left that as part of a comment. (8/5/2012 6: 27: 00 AM) i hope no poet is discouraged from writing whatever they feel, especially if it is hoped/believed that it will improve the lives of other people. in my small way i hope my poems improve to some small degree the lives of a few people. just writing my poems improves my own life. thanks, ellias, for sharing. bri :) the crystal table that was strange and tall is creative!

Mark Dillon says it all: Corruption is at the heart of everything evil in this world. As I see it, most ordinary people just want to live and let live, but the greedy ones are never satisfied. Democracy is a shield that 'they' use well for their own ends. Well written Ellias, we should all take note of your words.

facinating.mercy bocu nice topic you have chosen to write about. I agree with you.a poet had better write about the people's woes and the societies problems in a simple way. you konw all of Nietzche's effort was to write all these problems in only 10 words in his book Thus Spoke Zarathustra.May God bless him. But i want to know my friend, is it right to blame the poets because of showig their inner feelings? and why they are not writing about the crimes, global, mothers problems..... I wanna say when all poets write about their inner feelings, thats when we can see no SIGN OF POET'S FALL Some write about these woes like Forogh Farokhzad, and some write about his/her inner feelings like sohrab. Nice work pal.i love it. cheers

I've read this piece again. P'raps you'd be interested in Confrontation(Darfur)

Intersting piece. If you have a couple of spare minutes try Confrontation (Darfur) Thanks

nice poem, i love it, we hope to see the world with peace and without crime and killig.

I don't like long poems. It can be a good rap song. Feeling sympathy behind the words. But you can't do anything to them by poems. It's all.

Great writing Ellias, corruption is universal, we have to keep our heads up high, keep up the fight.

An inspiration, Sir. Let us all write! ! Loved it!

I agree totally with captain cur this is a truly amazing and well written poem. But having said that not every one is in the comfort zone to write of such things. You are a great writer and express your self with words so very well. Better then many people much better then myself

Such meaning n a real eye opener! ! ! Splendid meaning. truly magnificant! ! ! ! ~Bella

Superb poem... Shows deep sensibility, compassion... Good work... Terry

very good amazing this is my favorite poem (:

Your message is strong, well articulated and relevant in our technologically advanced yet barbaric world. The poets fall would be indicative of mankinds fall. My opinion of this poem is twofold. First a poet must write his passion. Most beginning artists start with subjects that are most familiar, mainly themselves. Hence the majority of love poems and self- deprecating poetry on these pages. As a poet gains confidence and skill he/she will attempt more complex subjects. Not all poets share your passion for world events or the state of man. They simply write to escape or beautify this pained life. All subjects have intricate value and are necessary to keep our craft alive. Love, family, birth, addiction, hardship and tales of survival are all necessary and inspirational. Write your passion, some will follow, others will not. Great, great poem with a powerful message, everyone on PM should read this poem.

That's SUPERB and BETTER than any of my poems

This is a masterpiece..the humanity i the main ingredient and makes the recipe be so tasty to read and to digest..for souls gain strength...Talented poet, keep it up_Unwritten Soul