Fall Of Dusk Comments

An invisible choir sings in the fading light They seem to welcome the arrival of the night....captivating expression. Loved this magnificent poem. Merry Christmas to you!

With you as the poetess, I do not need to say anything pertaining to the poem, because it's magnificent as always, yet I cannot attenuate the desire to communicate my pleasure seeing rhyme in your poetry, the dearth of which you eruditely compensated with imagery previously.

Thanks a lot Bri! Though in a humorous vein you have commented that long back my poems had color, I infer that you mean indirectly that now they don't have so much color as before! I too feel so! I love my older poems better than what I write now.....! Waning of faculties with aging! ! However I am glad this poem is going into your favourtie list

(continued) ...were you such a good poet 'so long ago'? ? ? ! i mean isn't 3 years long ago? ok, it isn't. as for your thoughts having any colour/color: THEY DID when you wrote the poem; of that i am sure! ! ! my mate and i enjoyed viewing and hearing (wing beats perhaps) maybe MILLIONS of bats leaving a hillside cave in Thailand for their nightly excursions. IT WAS (almost) amazing! but i don't 'amaze' easily. to MyPoemList. bri :)

some favorite lines [if you edit a bit; ha ha]: The sky grows pale, the flaming colors drained And the distant scenes, almost blurred.................i don't mind no rhyme here; i actually like to see such once in a while! ...no more amber or gold...........i'd thinking nor gold but it could be 'either/or'. :) don't frown; i'm your clown! (to continue) ...

This poem is a lens that captures the hues of an enchanting evening. Excellent work.10...

Excellent depiction on dusk that brought to life so vividly with colourful sights. I enjoyed this palatable poem too much. Many thanks for sharing.....10

A joy to read and savour, a stunning write with such panache and creativity, that is so powerful with nature's beauty brought to life so vividly!

A lovely description of dusk, hovering over the earth backed up by fading rays, lengthening shadows and birds returning to their nests etc. Enjoyed reading it.

Simply beautiful! (10)

Beautiful description of nature's hour leading toward night.

Another beautiful descriptive poem, a nice one.

You did a wonderful job describing dusk. Your oral paint brushes can be proud. Excellent visions, I know for I have observed what you so well describe. Thank you.