Sunday, January 29, 2017

Fall Of A Giant Comments

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'Twas a giant sequoia tree
Alive a thousand years or more.
Then some humans thought it would be
Profitable to cut a door -
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Ima Ryma
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Kim Barney 29 January 2017

I've always loved your stuff. You don't ever list them as sonnets, but they follow the English sonnet pattern (at least as far as rhyme pattern goes) . You don't have the right number of syllables for an English sonnet here (you need ten syllables in each line) but the effect is pleasing nevertheless. The rhyme pattern is ababcdcdefefgg. Oh, and your poems always make sense, which is more than I can say for some people. I like it. Thanks for posting.

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