Tuesday, November 3, 2009

Fall In Love? Comments

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I breath heavily
I can't keep my hands steady
I know I'm not ready
I can't help this feeling that screams inside
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Nathan Barkley
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Luwi Habte 17 November 2009

Oh what a poem... which tells a real what feels when someone falls in love nice piece luwi

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Catrina Heart 03 November 2009

Wow what a question of being hesitant.......... and vagueness wraps up the mind, holding back.......wonderful vivid piece! ! ! Thanks.........

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