People make fun at me...
my eyes glassy; nose stubby,
skin inky and body burly!
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The way in which you wrote this was VERY entertaining!
I like the entertaining twist on saddening feelings, very enjoyable.
Here is a sister of that sort to console..don't worry..kindly know my feelings in my 'domestic shades-10'.thank you
we all have our faults, they make us who we are, we learn from others and what they say, then we discover ourselves
All creations are beautiful and unique...we just have to discover one's beauty either inner or outer, but inner personality is far more important. Great write...10 for you.
God's creations are all beautiful.I feel so. Beauty lies in deeds and not in shapes.Gods creations are not alike. The poet Sathynarayana writes good poems, but I can not. Why. Can I find fault with the Almighty?
Let us not worry about the physical! Simple living, noble deeds, sweet words, honest work, cheerful disposition etc. need to be cultivated!
good one sir. an 8 for you. not that i'm of the age to rate a poet as elderly as yours, but a little more details would've helped describe the idea much better - and speaking of the idea, it's really nice one....
I really enjoyed reading this poem. It really speaks to how people feel about their imperfections
humour is at its best, when it fingers towards ones own chest...such a beautiful mind alone can visualise everything around on a balanced perspective...here you get a chance to dig at Him, Satya...and that is something to speak about...poem light but bright on account of the humour inside it...10
Thanks dear sathya, I like very expressive poems. Everything is said and done in this poem. But I support the idea.Do not look at things from commoners point of view.How do you see beauty if there is no ugly.
A cute poem, but don't get hung up on this ugly thing. Who you are and how you relate to others is so much more important. Have a great day Ron
such a way to say that you believe your not perfection when nobody is and thats the truth so never hate the way you look a poem that feels insecure always write what you believe
Fantastic piece..even the Almighty is not spared for erring while shaping your clay...A delightful read..10+++++