Monday, August 18, 2008

Fall Guy Comments

Rating: 4.6

People make fun at me...
my eyes glassy; nose stubby,
skin inky and body burly!
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Sathya Narayana
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Sandra Martyres 30 April 2009

Fantastic piece..even the Almighty is not spared for erring while shaping your clay...A delightful read..10+++++

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Kranthi Pothineni 17 April 2009

I can sense the feel of this poem. Very well expressed.

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<font color=black>Nagourta 01 September 2008

The way in which you wrote this was VERY entertaining!

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Ellie Sutton 01 September 2008

I like the entertaining twist on saddening feelings, very enjoyable.

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 29 August 2008

very enjoyable piece of work especially last two lines

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Indira Renganathan 29 August 2008

Here is a sister of that sort to console..don't worry..kindly know my feelings in my 'domestic shades-10'.thank you

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Nkululeko Mdudu 27 August 2008

we all have our faults, they make us who we are, we learn from others and what they say, then we discover ourselves

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C T Heart 27 August 2008

All creations are beautiful and unique...we just have to discover one's beauty either inner or outer, but inner personality is far more important. Great write...10 for you.

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Kris Smith 27 August 2008

The inner beauty of a person is far more important 10 Chris

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God's creations are all beautiful.I feel so. Beauty lies in deeds and not in shapes.Gods creations are not alike. The poet Sathynarayana writes good poems, but I can not. Why. Can I find fault with the Almighty?

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Subbaraman N V 26 August 2008

Let us not worry about the physical! Simple living, noble deeds, sweet words, honest work, cheerful disposition etc. need to be cultivated!

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Blue Eyes 25 August 2008

what a sad story of a man`s life i loved ur honesty.

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james Xane 24 August 2008

good one sir. an 8 for you. not that i'm of the age to rate a poet as elderly as yours, but a little more details would've helped describe the idea much better - and speaking of the idea, it's really nice one....

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Sarwar Chowdhury 24 August 2008

...really a fine composition.........10

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nothing over 23 August 2008

I really enjoyed reading this poem. It really speaks to how people feel about their imperfections

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Kesav Easwaran 23 August 2008

humour is at its best, when it fingers towards ones own chest...such a beautiful mind alone can visualise everything around on a balanced perspective...here you get a chance to dig at Him, Satya...and that is something to speak about...poem light but bright on account of the humour inside it...10

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Ershad Mazumder 23 August 2008

Thanks dear sathya, I like very expressive poems. Everything is said and done in this poem. But I support the idea.Do not look at things from commoners point of view.How do you see beauty if there is no ugly.

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Ron Flowers 23 August 2008

A cute poem, but don't get hung up on this ugly thing. Who you are and how you relate to others is so much more important. Have a great day Ron

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Amie-Lee ...... 23 August 2008

Great poem,10/10 :)

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Arabian Heart 23 August 2008

such a way to say that you believe your not perfection when nobody is and thats the truth so never hate the way you look a poem that feels insecure always write what you believe

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Sathya Narayana

Sathya Narayana

Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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