Sway in the air
Yellow, orange or red
Leaf or a flower
What your eyes see
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I walked through the fall Oh the beauty lies there dead or alive...beauty lies in boholder's eyes...it's true dear Rini. Wish you a happy and prosperous new year 2023.
Hi Rini, Loved this beautiful painting in words, of the fall. In fact autumn is the loveliest of all seasons for, though it is the harbinger of the malady called winter, it signifies the ousting of the harsh and burning summer. But, somehow I am trained to hate autumn, because winters tend to be horrible for me because of my respiratory ailment. Your poem brings out the beauty of autumn in its entirety. Great poem. Thanks.
A lovely poem that captures the beauty and wonders of fall. Beautifully crafted with great imagery.
A very beautiful poem! I especially like " You mesmerize my eyes" and "And the joy in heart is at the peak."