Saturday, October 7, 2006

Fall Breath (Unrhymed) Comments

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We sat in the fake city lights of the city
talking and looking back
at our lives spent a part.
Reflecting is what he called it,
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Katherine Rhodes
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Ivan Donn Carswell 29 October 2006

Intriguing poem Katherine. I like the imagery, particularly light and life reflecting in breath and through breathing out. Cool!

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Beaver Dam, WI
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