Fall Anew Comments
Just a little drop,
Yet you make me smile,
Soft, cold,
Yet I feel alive.
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Firstly in readable poetry you need imagery to involve me the reader. Secondly, I feel, you need a subject not flogged and seen from a different perspective and lastly if you make the reader want to read it a second time.then you have a successful formula. Miss Padhi you succeed in all of these points. Love this story.Keep writing please.
Thnk u for reading my work and for your encouraging words. They really mean a lot to me. I'll always keep those points in my mind while writing in the future. Thnx again: -) : -D
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7/25/2025 8:48:05 PM # 1.0.0
Your poem is slendid. This a beautiful piece indeed. Keep up the poetic spirit.
Thnx for reading: -D