Friday, April 6, 2007

Fall (About A Friend) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Falling through the bitter air,
so pure,
so unfair,
nothing to clutch onto,
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emily summers
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Neil Marsden 12 October 2008

Hi Emily, This is such a difficult piece of subject matter but oyou seem to have overcome such hurdles with such maturity and grace. A beautiful poem and tribute perhaps? Very talented lady! Neil.

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David Harris 06 April 2007

Emily, sometimes we do desperate things in a moment of panic, never thinking how it will effect others until it is too late. Beautifully words poem that kept me rivited until the last line. Top Marks from me young lady. Thanks for sharing this lovely piece. David

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Jamal Ludin 06 April 2007

it's a spontaneous action -we all fall all the time

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