Saturday, August 29, 2009

Fall Comments

Rating: 5.0

the summer is ending
I feel Septembers
Cold fingers
reaching around the
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Bryan Alexander
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Adens Kamwi 12 September 2009

impressive write 'B' keep them coming

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Kari Alexander 31 August 2009

the imagery in this one is fantastic and the way you separated the letters of 'fall' at the end was super creative, i like this one a lot. it's a different style than most of your others.

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Janell Cressman 29 August 2009

I Like this poem, it is easy for me to see and it makes me sad because were i live we didn't get summer until the end of july pretty much, so i understand this poem very well, Very well written poem, I like it more then most of your other stuff because it seems so much better

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Bryan Alexander

Wickliffe, Ohio
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