Fall Comments

This is one to savour... it warrants reading three, four, five times and a return visit. How much reflection has gone into this one, containing so much truth... a gem. t x

Nice poem. Life changes like seasons

this poem really makes the reader think a lot n thats your success

Wow David, this packs a punch. So very poignant, your pain is palpable. It's a letting go, an embracing of a new season, a realisation.... it resonates and it hits where it's meant to. Brilliant writing, in fact I think this is one of your best ever. Bravo! HG: -) xx

The depth of the sadness expressed in these lines cannot be measured by moments.It is soul deep. David, you are a fine wordsmith. Ten from me. Always your friend, Sandra

A moment where in youth I once doubted the cynicsm of humanity and hoped for realities that will not conspire, ... what cha' doing to me DeSanta? I couldn't find one ting to laugh about..boo hoo neveretheless.. a seriously good poem by you...

The building blocks of eternity, moments, have been well displayed to leave one pondering...nice write! ...10

Different life's moment illustrated in a very fine composition,10 for this social awareness piece.

We fall......we rise.......the next thing we know...........another wind blows the sorrow..............another joy is a long way to go....! !

A moment now of cold war fears and posturing leaders financial melt-downs and recession tendencies, fake world borders, ........................................... I think that it long will be as eternal struggle kindly and angrily...10///

A splendid return, David! It is a deep, wonderful poem. I like the retrospective viewpoint, the minor tone, the way you try to get the whole world from the news and your own world in a poem. The fall is close to every poet's heart. I enjoy your interpretation of the subject. Best regards, one a

Indeed fall is here and all that it has brought with it. Very nice, David! '10! ' Best Wishes, Marilyn

an excellent poem.A 10 for you.

This interesting poem pays attention to actual aspects of life, though expresses an intense historical sentiment. Our emotions appear well in these lines. A communicative message by a good friend.