Friday, June 16, 2006

Fall Comments

Rating: 3.8

on a very narrow, thin ledge
sitting up high on a wall
wishing no big gust of wind come along
causing me to Fall
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David Darbyshire
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Patricia Gale 17 June 2006

To me this sounds like life itself. On the edge, just go ahead one more gust of trouble and crash to the ground. But we all see things differently. Great read! Patricia

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Duncan Wyllie 16 June 2006

Dear David You look so much better on the ground, come on in where its warmer Love Duncan x

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Dan Tharp 16 June 2006

Yes... for heaven's sake come down from there! ... hehehe dan

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