Friday, October 24, 2014

Fall Comments

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One more week of October,
its 'bright blue weather';

one more week of apple cider,
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Daniel Brick 27 October 2014

Your poem FALL really emphasizes the human dimension of the season, specifically, October. It's a long reach of arms to pull people together before the winter freeze separates them into little igloos of survival. Your summons is not one necessitated by physical survival; it's rather a moral summons to recognize the seasons still carry messages for us, and Fall's message is BE TOGETHER AND HAPPY. IT'S THE HUMANE WAY. (Have you seen my recent poem A FEW AUTUMN NOTES. I also scattered three Autumn poems in my narrative poem THE NEW LIFE IN SIX STAGES, which is 675 lines long! I was inspired this season.)

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Frank Avon

Frank Avon

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