Saturday, November 26, 2016

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This empire of mine
is nothing but a brawl
in the universe within
I am trying to crawl
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Aditya Upadhyaya
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Chinedu Dike 27 November 2016

Beautiful motivational piece of poetry, well articulated and elegantly brought forth in good rhyme scheme with insight. As the saying goes, 'when the going gets tough the tough gets going.' Lovely poem. Thanks for sharing Aditya.

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Aditya Upadhyaya 27 November 2016

Thanks a lot Chinedu. I appreciate your views and understanding. :)

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Jaya Das 27 November 2016

well, this is a short and a beautiful write very nicely penned....thank you for sharing friend.

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Aditya Upadhyaya 28 November 2016

Thank you Jaya for reading and valuable views :)

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Sister Frances 26 November 2016

Well written poem, great rhyming. Thanks for sharing

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Aditya Upadhyaya 28 November 2016

Thanks Frances :)

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