I don’t see a falling star but I’ll make a wish,
My guardian angel is out there and he‘ll listen to me.
Take me away from this world of lies
And let me live in a place where love never dies.
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If this is a fake world, we need to do a reality check.This sounds beautiful.Love Duncan
sweet. but, your fake world sounded real at times... it was good though i loved your flow. you sounded defensive.. i dont know. i really liked it though
Ivy, i guess you like stars eh? Cool, i do too. Hey you're just so good at describing! It's unbelieveable!
The last two lines were surprisingly good. Another beautiful poem of yours. G.