Sunday, November 8, 2009

Fake Reality Comments

Rating: 5.0

All people do is act
We might as well smoke some crack
The world we live in is so pretend
No one is truly ever your friend
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Mgt Man
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Daniel Blevins 09 November 2009

all the worlds a stage :) amazing poem ~

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Ying Escalona 08 November 2009

yah..and freedom is replaced with license....

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Penney Cooper 08 November 2009

i think this poem is great mgt man. i have one small suggestion-second line-snort some crack i think would be better as smoke some crack. crack is cocaine made into rocks you burn. great poem. real talent :)

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