Thursday, June 18, 2009

Fake No More! Comments

Rating: 3.9

-you’ve blinded my heart

-you made my feelings ocean full your jar from the tap of my heart
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Hala Hash.
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Afzal Shauq 24 June 2009

the river of my tears got down to my checks to grave down the history of that broken heart its a good line..the whole piece of writing is better one..but if was done in poetic way that could have been better... I prefer if you redo in poem form..the idea is really catchy... appreciate your talent and no doubbt you are talented enough... and committed to your words too..10+++++++++++

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that was a meaningful poem, and like the way you wrote..so will give you a true ten

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Noha El3wdy 21 June 2009

sure you have to be the queen of your self great work. liked it

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rago rago 18 June 2009

fake no more ....... where you are the queen........... well penned.......

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