Monday, September 24, 2012

Fake Laughs Comments

Rating: 4.8

I've done a lot of good
helped out when I could
treated all individuals as equals
well I try,
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Kelvin Owusu
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Kelvin Owusu 28 September 2012

thank you for the comments thomas: ats a great piece

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 25 September 2012

Very honest, and very humble heart of a poet. but of course, still you deserve forgiveness. The poem builds up an argument which actually succeeds. Thanks for sharing.

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Nader Baheri 25 September 2012

nice one. it really impressed me.the best part is the last stanza although it is the sadest. I am sure that you have done a lot of good. mucha gracias

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 25 September 2012

I believe in the their existence, i mean fake laughs. they are every where god and great work

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Stevie Taite 24 September 2012

You seem so hard on yourself in this poem. Look forward with that warm heart I hear beating, beating through your beautiful poems!

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 24 September 2012

when the society comprises of people like us, how do we call ourselves 'staying alone'? a few lines of this poem really touch the heart! Nice, Kelvin O

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