I've done a lot of good
helped out when I could
treated all individuals as equals
well I try,
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Very honest, and very humble heart of a poet. but of course, still you deserve forgiveness. The poem builds up an argument which actually succeeds. Thanks for sharing.
nice one. it really impressed me.the best part is the last stanza although it is the sadest. I am sure that you have done a lot of good. mucha gracias
I believe in the their existence, i mean fake laughs. they are every where god and great work
You seem so hard on yourself in this poem. Look forward with that warm heart I hear beating, beating through your beautiful poems!
when the society comprises of people like us, how do we call ourselves 'staying alone'? a few lines of this poem really touch the heart! Nice, Kelvin O
thank you for the comments thomas: ats a great piece