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powerfully emotionally poetic words that I can relate to. Keep it up! !

WOW that was breath taking very well writen and its such a powerful pieces great job

ABSOLUTELY PERFECT! again reading your poems brings so much emotion and passion! your an amazing poet whatever you do dont change! i love the way you write i can relate like no other poem i read b4 ~Bella

Woa dark and foreboding. I completely adored this poem; as always =)

Very dark again, sometimes you have to look past death, And see whats in the living. A fantastic poem.

A good poem. My favourite line was Wrists crying out their immortal love. Powerful stufff

Amazing poem Crim, , i give you 10++++ for this one...check my new ones if you have time..great write sister!

Oh my God! Strong emotions are shown here, once I read it I felt a shiver! Keep up the good work :) You are talented!