Friday, May 14, 2010

Fake Comments

Rating: 5.0

i carry something fake
its working for a while
it can fool any man
its an artificial smile
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patrick o'shaughnessy
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Jennifer K 05 July 2010

this is an incredibly well written, sad poem. really good work. Everyone has a fake smile at some point. I hope yours has gone away, though. for good. All the love

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merced california
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