Wednesday, June 3, 2009

Fake Comments

Rating: 5.0

fake a smile,
it will take awhile.
but soon i will forget you.
your all in the past,
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lexy depaola
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Sameer Ahmed 05 June 2009

Well narrated something not genuine, but meant to be taken for genuine. Good improvisation while writing this short poem.....10/10

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Kesav Easwaran 05 June 2009

good piece Alexa..i also love this poem! a ten for the brisk way you conveyed your true message there...thanks

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Alexa Depaola 03 June 2009

i love thisss poem :)

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