Walking in the street alone
And The weather is so cold
Having words haven't been told
My body like cube of ice
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In your poem, you have poured down your heart that has taken the form of a beautiful poem. Your poem needs only slight polish, rest everything is okay.
Some people are real and some are fake. After a while after you have known them you get to tell the difference. If they are fake your reputation is at stake. If they are real you know how it feel. All the best.