Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Wednesday, January 29, 2014

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Dog bites with full force
No one picks them and remove as unproductive force
People provide fool and easy shelter
In night time, they have vigilant gate keeper
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 January 2014

Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! 6 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 January 2014

Good Leanne Ferguson16 minutes ago Keep writing Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 January 2014

although I appreciate the sentiment for dogs... Georgetown Murphy Pratt16 minutes ago ....the poem has a herky-jerky vibe to it. bits and pieces that don't fit.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 January 2014

Dog bite with full force No one picks them and remove as unproductive force

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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