Thursday, September 22, 2011

Faithful Comments

Rating: 4.5

Day upon day my heart keeps falling deeper,
into the pain of your sorrow;
Your cruel heart has become weary of me now,
You have left me alone, but your sorrow remains;
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Vivek Haldar
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Borgjie Distura 26 September 2011

its painful poet...i can feel ur own pain as u beautifully capture it in ur poem

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Vipins Puthooran 24 September 2011

Excellent, short but strong.... Well written my friend..

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Louie Vetter 23 September 2011

wow, i like it, a lot

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Winston Harding 23 September 2011

Short, but powerful. Keep on writing. Be well.

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