When he first looked at her
He knew She is the one,
With a sweet smile & a glowing stare
She looked back at him.
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its amazingly written in very professional way..seems to me as you are very perfect poet... and the idea this poem is rich, inspiring, meaningful and poetic flow.. wonderful poem is this one... appreciate you..10 ++++++++++++
There is a good story here, Dana. After twenty years you will revise it and may be laugh at this. You have a beautiful style waitinig to be amilorated and I hate to see you be a hermit.