There a sky deep and dark
And eternity it reaches into my thoughts
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This is some unusually terrific and poetically magnificent way to explain and feel love. This poem masterfully paints your feelings , rich, powerful but also soft and beautiful like the Roses you so graciously describe, 'And gratefully my hands lifting roses with no pain added' This work is deeply submerged in poetical delight. and rightly appreciated.
Hi Dawn, Wonderful poem on love. The pure, unadulterated, uninhibited feeling... A babble of sweet murmurings in love, always Just under the way of sound it plays Keeping me steady on and strong I have no idea how to behold a view so imperative to me Beautifully rendered.
And my faith in love burns on/Burns on like a song! Beautiful expression! This is an excellent piece of work! It's my pleasure revisiting it
Stunning poem Dawn. Each mediative read brings deeper appreciation to the spiritual connections that we have to support us.10+
oH, mY GOD..WHAT a wonderful write..its just superb in all aspects....Love eternal love......With a same wavelength...
It's a lovely poem! Belated congratulations! .............10
Nicely carried through! Too many lines I liked to say which one the best. Thanks. kjt
'It is a meticulous and beautiful unrelenting attention It is a pure and unadulterated feeling of connection A babble of sweet murmurings in love, always Just under the way of sound it plays'... is pure love that is spilling from these line. A beauty. Congrats.
This is why my faith in love burns on Burns on like a song Wow, what a beautiful song of love dear poet. Thanks for the sharing and congrats for the POTD. Subhas
It is a pure and unadulterated feeling of connection A babble of sweet murmurings in love, The poem very well brings out your faith in love. It beautifully flows too.. Heartiest congratulations on being selected
Faith is under fire / Faith under fire, anyway, title is well explained in the poem, ........ thanks for sharing, congrats on its being bay's poem
a wonderful poem of having faith in something we cannot see? it must be pure love! ..............well written Dawn
Congrats, love is never stale, it comes back like the sun and the moon. Beautiful poem.
Dawn, such a splendid write.... congrats for being chosen... a huge 10+++¥¥
Holding faith, love and peace eternity reaches into our thoughts taking us towards light of wisdom passing through even deeper and darker sky. Life feels wonder of God's creation in love. This poem is excellent and a nice poem of the day. Congratulations! ....10
I know i would find you! ! ! Love and faith! Peace and joy! ! ! Heart's love. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Beautiful poem dear poetess....thanks......