Saturday, September 5, 2009

Faith That Echoes Hollowly Comments

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Her mind quickly flips through her memory
reminding her of the constant rain
pouring out from her eyes
but tonight her eyes were dry as the desert
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Alecia Nak
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Jake Andrews 16 September 2009

i like your use of metaphores. kind of reminds me of a relationship i had with a girl...

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Blue Eyes 13 September 2009

very nice and deep unlike the hollowness of his soul.

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