Monday, November 21, 2016

Faith's Touch, Faith's Wonder Comments

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FAITH ‘S TOUCH, FAITH'S WONDER

‘That I might touch the hem of His garment,
Reach down and touch the tassel of blue.'
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Paul Warren 30 November 2016

An excellent poem full of emotion.

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Daniel Brick 26 November 2016

I like your title: the whole story of the poem is compressed in those four words: The afflicted woman touches Jesus's gown which proves her faith in him and immediately the wonder of the miracle of healing occurs. The narrative that makes up the body of your poem is well paced, and I enjoyed reading this very human story. But it's the title that really impresses me in the swiftness of the miracle once faith is affirmed.

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