We are passing on sea shore
To make flow of mind we feel
Swimming boat stands up here
To hold us it carries minds.
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Faith of God flows within us, when we feel and link with God. This poem is greatly written.
Mock test! But, is mankind ready for the truth? Nice work.
A very metaphoric write where life is imagined as a flowing sea! Enjoyed the poem!
There is a powerful connection between the Sea and The Holy See that can only be realized via an unfettered Faith in The Supreme and HIS many mysteries that challenge this Faith but that cannot and will not be revealed and marveled at in absolute until the last Gold Seal be opened...An excellent piece of work, Kumar...~FjR(+) MXV~
Faith flows in sand is a nice poem I had to read it a couple of times to get the whole meaning. The figurative language employed is awesome. Thanks for sharing.
Beautiful drop. 'Pure mind tells to hold idea, look at in faith flows sand. ' is so beautiful. Inspiring.
We should perform faithful actions. Duty should be done properly. This poem is interesting.