Friday, April 13, 2012

Faith Comments

Rating: 3.9

Friend, the world is hard
Countryman, the world is really hard
Brother, the world is very hard
Where problems are stable mountain
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Duku Akwasi Odwaa Boffour
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* Sunprincess * 19 July 2014

........a nice write....and congratulations on poem of the day...enjoyed..

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Agboyi Felix 19 July 2014

good piece.i like the last stanza, it tells the true meaning off the poem.

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Agboyi Felix 19 July 2014

good piece.i love the last stanza, it really tells the true meaning of the poem.

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Joseph Poewhit 19 July 2013

Faith can do wonders

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Babatunde Aremu 19 July 2013

Nice write. It is true that problems are stable than mountains but with faith they can be leveled. Thanks for sharing

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Gajanan Mishra 19 July 2013

really great write, thanks, my dear poet.

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Kelvin Owusu 09 September 2012

this to me my fav from what ive read very well written

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Godfrey Morris 19 July 2012

Such a great and inspirational write.

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Ugoh Ifeanyi 19 July 2012

Wat a nice poem..u wrote Duku, congrats for the poem of dayit worth. This ur poem is really encouraging, with poetry itself flowing through it..nice work. More power to your elbow.

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 18 July 2012

what the nice work. i like the three last lines the most. yeah, some people die in lonely condition because of their own believe. nice work DUKU Ellias

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John Raubenheimer 27 May 2012

I like the repetition in this poem which, together with its imagery, gives it its power. I wish English was an easier language for a budding poet.

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Sharad Juneja 09 May 2012

beautiful.indeed..............................

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 May 2012

Great piece of work. Keep it up. Thanks for sharing it with us. E.K.L.

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Romeo Della Valle 13 April 2012

Wow! Congratulation my dear friend Duku Akwasi! You have decided to enter triumphantly into the Poetry World! WELCOME! What a way by posting this your first poem well crafted and poignant with a rich imagery! This amazing write has become your stepping stone to start a long journey through the path of beauty and talent! Congratulations again! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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