Friend, the world is hard
Countryman, the world is really hard
Brother, the world is very hard
Where problems are stable mountain
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good piece.i like the last stanza, it tells the true meaning off the poem.
good piece.i love the last stanza, it really tells the true meaning of the poem.
Nice write. It is true that problems are stable than mountains but with faith they can be leveled. Thanks for sharing
Wat a nice poem..u wrote Duku, congrats for the poem of dayit worth. This ur poem is really encouraging, with poetry itself flowing through it..nice work. More power to your elbow.
what the nice work. i like the three last lines the most. yeah, some people die in lonely condition because of their own believe. nice work DUKU Ellias
I like the repetition in this poem which, together with its imagery, gives it its power. I wish English was an easier language for a budding poet.
Great piece of work. Keep it up. Thanks for sharing it with us. E.K.L.
Wow! Congratulation my dear friend Duku Akwasi! You have decided to enter triumphantly into the Poetry World! WELCOME! What a way by posting this your first poem well crafted and poignant with a rich imagery! This amazing write has become your stepping stone to start a long journey through the path of beauty and talent! Congratulations again! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!
........a nice write....and congratulations on poem of the day...enjoyed..