Tuesday, January 27, 2009
Fairytales Comments
Rating: ★5.0
We all know fairytales are not real,
But can be very sweet.
The princesses always are the way we wish to feel,
Pretty, nice and petite.
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Allan Macli Borges
27 January 2009
very beautiful, but the crashing was so abruptly... but its beautiful!
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Beautifully Unknown
27 January 2009
I really like this a lot! I love the way everything just flows together! NIcely done! Beautiful!
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7/31/2025 5:36:43 AM # 1.0.0
This is a very good poem. You did a good job of putting it together. The key was the last line. It was a great last line that saved the ending. The line before it was problematic. Overall, a fine poem. GW62