Wednesday, June 11, 2008

Fairy Tell Comments

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Magic exists in Fairy Tales
But truth finds the lies
That fairy’s tell
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Shalini Kts 14 August 2008

if only people realize that there are lies behind fairy tellers they will start to believe in them selves, nice poem...

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excellent.... its so true. its hard to capture the magic, but underneath, there are always lies... description is wonderful, and nice title. the midnight lines, and describing the other fairy tales endings in which the magic faded, great work.

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