Wednesday, August 3, 2011

Fairy Tales Comments

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i used to believe in fairy tales
ignoring the real world where everything is for sale
i used to believe in fairy tales
where the feelings are so honest and pure
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salma pinky
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Unwritten Soul 08 August 2011

Who says you we cant believe the fairy tales? ? ? i dont refer to another princess-prince story...Cinderella is fantasy story fella, Snow white was just entertaining unreal write..so many writes talk about high...sounds like a nice melody, unwritten and never unheard one..when i sat you can believe the fairy tales story is when you make your life as a story, reality plot...dont be a weak victim like a tonnes of tales told you, be yourself with strong and powerful girl to fight all barriers (To all girls must need to do this) , if you fall keep raise and dont afraid to chase dream...this is a fairy tale you need to write in your life book, you can cast as your own character based on reality. Whispering rose told you good one, take it..The write here is so good narrative one, like it! _Unwritten Soul

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Whispering Rose 08 August 2011

fascinating piece indeed...you're telling the story in such a beautiful way, and what i like the most is the lesson behind it...we all live in bubbles at a certain period of our lives and we believe that the worlds is as perfect as we like to see it, but the day comes when people around us-friends and family- or the cucamstances we live in strike us with the fact that 'the perfect world' doesn't really exist, fairy tales don't exist, and that people can be cruel, mean and deceptive....an unescapable, terrible fact...but no matter what, the small, tiny feeling that there is something good in the world should continue to exist as long as we live my friend...otherwise we won't be able to continue the long road Thank you for writting this

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Aqeb Benazir 08 August 2011

Very nice story! ! the first stanza is perfect! and 'but you're not the one to blame and i promiss that i won't be the same' is very sublime and deep! ! well penned this is!

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