Sunday, October 5, 2014

Fairy's Visit Comments

Rating: 5.0

My teeth are young and white,
Losing one is joy and fun.

A beautiful lady comes at night
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Raluca Mitra
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Ramesh Rai 28 October 2014

Short sweet and beautiful

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Chinedu Dike 05 October 2014

I like the articulation of the poem, it made me read the lines severally, l had to pause to capture the essence. It's a beautiful and well crafted piece. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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