Sunday, April 10, 2016

Fairy Of Dreams I Welcome Your Allures Comments

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So what if sometimes I dream,
She is a lovely and sweet sixteen,
Seventeen, eighteen or nineteen,
And in a park, enjoying ice-cream,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Edward Kofi Louis 12 May 2016

So close that we listen to the breath! Nice piece of work.

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Loke Kok Yee 13 April 2016

your dream in a lovely rhyme took me back to days gone by when I was young and in my prime thank you sir

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Kelly Kurt 11 April 2016

I must admit that daydreaming can be a comfort sometimes, if not just a temporary respite.

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Hazel Durham 11 April 2016

You spin with your golden pen dreams that set your great passion for life free to wander and uplift and warm your heart, spellbinding and enchanting write!

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