Monday, February 9, 2009

Fairy Garden Comments

Rating: 4.5

I strolled through a green patch
With Slow light feet
Surprised yet calm
Bit by bit
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Cherry Sha
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Josh Norton 16 February 2009

\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\ it was good

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Ron Flowers 13 February 2009

A very enjoyable read. Ron

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Francesca Martin 10 February 2009

a melancholy fairytale that is full of reminders to us all.very nice work!

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Maria Barbara Korynt 10 February 2009

Beautiful, subtle and delicate 'story' as the quiet sweet music who is soothing our hearts. So much a wonderful is in your garden, stopping breath! I am pleased that I could read it. You can in the natural way very much interesting administer your poetry - and we can feel emotions with your heroes.This poem is for me close. It wake up my reflection, associated with my writing and other garden... I am appraising highly (9) for the ability of bringing up 'strings' which a waiting for the touch. It is playing entire living in us. Greetings for you, very warmly :) Maria Barbara Korynt - I am also inviting to comment on my poetry.

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C. P. Sharma 10 February 2009

an angelic garden and a well meaning dream. Awesome composition with its magical spell. Cherry, Thank you for sharing. CP

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Kjxnhvkzdh Vnhcjfh 10 February 2009

its great i love it! you get a +10 in my book

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alice sunderland 10 February 2009

nice stuff cherry. dreamy......

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ata khan 10 February 2009

a beautiful dream.... very nicely conceived and penned. You have enormous talent, keep it up Miss Sha 10++++

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C.R. Clark 10 February 2009

This is a very finely written poem indeed, Cherry. A wonderful picture of a 'better way' such as we humans often dream about. I thouroghly enjoyed reading this work of yours. Thanks for the invite. Richard

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Meggie Gultiano 10 February 2009

this is nicely penned, Cherry.Sometimes we have to do this, to forget our woes once i a while. Hugs, meggie

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Shannon ... 10 February 2009

sweet poem...thank you for sharing! 10

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Paul Scott-Bates 10 February 2009

Hi Cherry Interesting subject. Some clever rhymes and thoughts. Please read my poetry - I've only just started uploading so many more to follow. Paul

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Kerli Undead 10 February 2009

sweet peom <3 sweet 'n gentle great style! ! ~Kerli

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Lalitha iyer 10 February 2009

Dear friend, Your poem the style of it is very nice. But please do go on subject of deeper meaning, more than superficial things, observe nature more closely, say minutely and observe the intriciate things happening around and pen with more vivid imageries.

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Neha Aradhye 10 February 2009

ooohh....so lovely, dear.... wish there was a land of all the things u mentioned! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Great! !

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Seema Chowdhury 09 February 2009

very sweet and nice dream cherry. i wish we can all dream like that and for a while get away from this terrible world full of bitter realities.thanks for sharing. if time permits read 7 of my new poems on page 1 with * on them and send your valuable comments.

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R.k Das 09 February 2009

yes it is dreamy, , a nice dream to dream.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 09 February 2009

I've been through to quite a journey...............feel like im the fairy myself.Nice piece dear Cherry!

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James Roberts 09 February 2009

An excellent poem I liked the end 10++

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