I strolled through a green patch
With Slow light feet
Surprised yet calm
Bit by bit
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a melancholy fairytale that is full of reminders to us all.very nice work!
Beautiful, subtle and delicate 'story' as the quiet sweet music who is soothing our hearts. So much a wonderful is in your garden, stopping breath! I am pleased that I could read it. You can in the natural way very much interesting administer your poetry - and we can feel emotions with your heroes.This poem is for me close. It wake up my reflection, associated with my writing and other garden... I am appraising highly (9) for the ability of bringing up 'strings' which a waiting for the touch. It is playing entire living in us. Greetings for you, very warmly :) Maria Barbara Korynt - I am also inviting to comment on my poetry.
an angelic garden and a well meaning dream. Awesome composition with its magical spell. Cherry, Thank you for sharing. CP
a beautiful dream.... very nicely conceived and penned. You have enormous talent, keep it up Miss Sha 10++++
This is a very finely written poem indeed, Cherry. A wonderful picture of a 'better way' such as we humans often dream about. I thouroghly enjoyed reading this work of yours. Thanks for the invite. Richard
this is nicely penned, Cherry.Sometimes we have to do this, to forget our woes once i a while. Hugs, meggie
Hi Cherry Interesting subject. Some clever rhymes and thoughts. Please read my poetry - I've only just started uploading so many more to follow. Paul
Dear friend, Your poem the style of it is very nice. But please do go on subject of deeper meaning, more than superficial things, observe nature more closely, say minutely and observe the intriciate things happening around and pen with more vivid imageries.
ooohh....so lovely, dear.... wish there was a land of all the things u mentioned! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Great! !
very sweet and nice dream cherry. i wish we can all dream like that and for a while get away from this terrible world full of bitter realities.thanks for sharing. if time permits read 7 of my new poems on page 1 with * on them and send your valuable comments.
I've been through to quite a journey...............feel like im the fairy myself.Nice piece dear Cherry!
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