Fair Called Life.... Comments

a fair in which we get lost too...lovely comparison of life toa fair

a very good symbolic write...'fair' or not the 'Slaves' do enjoy their life here in this world as the Master blessed... and with out particularly worried about their predetermined return flight! 10

Freedom to fly and shake their wings must feel great after living in a cage.

lovely poem the different hues of life -10 anjali

A unique perception about life. I really enjoyed it. CP

Perhaps the God is a magician who is performing in a front of audience who is too terrified to laugh.................cheers..............

are you comparing slaves to humans and master to god or something like that. it doesn't sound that good to me thought. but the poem is well written good work