Faint lotus,
your outline
appearing in the sun,
...
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I read with envy your ability to find faith in such delicacy. Lovely and inspiring, Max
A wonderful reaffirmation of one's faith, Max. Buds will open as there is no clumsiness here.
Score! This is so beautiful, Max. 'You come from the invisible, where you exist as archetype.' Wow.
ahh.. so you tried to plant a lotus but not succeeded fully? and there comes Nature's miracle and saves the lotus.. I think that is the most important keeping your faith in something even when you feel hopeless.. Great poem Max! HBH