Thursday, December 22, 2005

Faint Lotus Comments

Rating: 5.0

Faint lotus,
your outline
appearing in the sun,
...
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Max Reif
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Ivy Christou 24 December 2005

ahh.. so you tried to plant a lotus but not succeeded fully? and there comes Nature's miracle and saves the lotus.. I think that is the most important keeping your faith in something even when you feel hopeless.. Great poem Max! HBH

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Linda Hepner 22 December 2005

I read with envy your ability to find faith in such delicacy. Lovely and inspiring, Max

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Joseph Daly 22 December 2005

A wonderful reaffirmation of one's faith, Max. Buds will open as there is no clumsiness here.

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Score! This is so beautiful, Max. 'You come from the invisible, where you exist as archetype.' Wow.

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