Thursday, September 4, 2014

Fain Servant Comments

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I can't conjure, for I am a fool
I enjoy with their milk and wool
I can't do promises, it's so heavy
My sheep, if uncared go on wavy,
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Edward Kofi Louis 05 September 2014

A nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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Neela Nath Das 04 September 2014

An allegorical poem, I think.Loved reading.

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