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....be a my killer .................i realize (from your bio) that english is not your first (nor second? ?) language, but i do commend the effort to write using it. i question the use of a in this phrase. it seems to me you don't want both a and my. and gutter? gut? and header? head? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - the 2nd and 3rd stanzas puzzle me even more. but thanks for sharing. perhaps a poet note would have helped me? bri :)

..............the first stanza is really great.....enjoyed reading this poem....