Friday, November 23, 2012

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Another Day anew.
I will succeed this time.
The warmth of the water rolling off my back gives me confidence.
How smooth the surface feels with the touch of a hand encourages me.
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The Silence Heard
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Alla Simone 08 December 2012

The irony as the colors all match inspires me. Where do they come from? (great placement in the poem for an innocent, vulnerable question) How quickly the light can fade. I thought today would be better. It's just another failure. This was very sad but still a joy to read as the storytelling was done so well. Thanks for sharing. This is relatable.

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