Failure? ? Comments

Yes needs to be edited a bit, but the structure is nice! good poem.

Good poem needs to be edited badly. The form needs to be given strong structure and it is a bad grammar ridden thing full of typos and such. Though you are only 14 so you have time to work on it. I am 16 and still working on it.

This is a great poem, with lots of truth.

Many times I have failed that it would take so many page to describe all of them in detail, however, I have learned my lessons the hard and painful ways, and I prevailed, great poem, my friend, keep it up, Love and Peace, Romeo

Proverbs 18: 21 never say what you are not.

yes u r right......i wish all the people think like you great poem

The poem is absolutely great.

totoo....i agree..naka relate aq ahaha

yes you have the right attitude to succeed and now at your age you should have a yearning for learning full on and keep writing regards

Failure is a success in itself in having just tried.

i love this poem it made me think about myself a lot thanks for writing this

Good concept with powerful intent. What started as a personal question turned into a universal appeal. Keep the faith, , , keep writing.

faliure is in the mind, failure is a way to get better, fail a hundred times and you will be better in the end than the person who got it right the first time

Ye i agree that it's a good optimistic poem! ! .. Contains strong messages too.thanks for sharing. I hope you take a look on my poems...10 Merna

Very optimistic. True, lots of people do need some optimism. Good poem.

very inspiring... with optimistic outlook interesting to read great concept on this... .....on survival in life... great piece, indeed thanks for sharing 10 Lovelots, Maia