Friday, November 11, 2016

Failure Comments

Rating: 5.0

Is the failure curse or boon?
All failed to judge it miserably.
Through care and concern in plenty
I liked to make my mother fail
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Mallika Achuthan Menon
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Jazib Kamalvi 14 October 2019

Such a nice poem, Mallika. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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Khairul Ahsan 10 September 2018

'as the gift of life is true friendship' - true friendship is priceless! It stands us in good stead through thick and thin.

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Deep Paul 13 April 2018

Nicely written. Loved reading it. A 10++++

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Siddartha Montik 16 November 2016

Yes Failure when Judged properly it helps us Judge us against circumstance or others.. if we are failure or Not.. you have shown and given all sides of such Measurement! well written Thank you for invite.

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Mallika Achuthan Menon 19 November 2016

Thanks for your valuable comment....

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Unnikrishnan E S 14 November 2016

Hi Mallika, There is no gift like love. Love supplements all failures and shortcomings. It overpowers all ills. As Kumaran Aasan wrote SnehamaaNakhilasaaramoozhiyil- Love is the essense of everything in the world. Beautiful poem on love and hope. On how love compensate losses. Loved reading. All the best. Thank you for sharing.100+

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Mallika Achuthan Menon 20 November 2016

Thanks....

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Paul Sebastian 12 November 2016

Your allusion is unique. All who were part of you became a failure.You became a success in spite of the circumstances. Your poem is beautifully written. Is it failure or boon? The result justifies the action. You have flowered to be a beautiful person writing lovely poems. That is a boon. See and count the blessings, Mallika.

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Mallika Achuthan Menon 20 November 2016

Thank you very much....

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Sekharan Pookkat 12 November 2016

Nobody fails nobody succeeds learn lessons from life which comes only once and gives no time for recapitulation

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Mallika Achuthan Menon 20 November 2016

Thanks..

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Dipankar Sadhukhan 12 November 2016

An excellent write. You deserve 10.

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