Failing Love Poem by Jacob Courtney

Failing Love



You led me into a world of pure
beauty that was very peaceful
and very true to who we was as one.
Yet now that world is lost to us.
That place in which we lived the
place where we was free. Now the
world is cold and bitter frozen by
the cold and darkness that has come
from us. We turned this world of
love into a world that knows only
pain and sorrow. Why must love come
and go like the breeze from the ocean.
Why must we be so lonely like the
wind that tranverses across the
great lands. Shouldnt our love
have been more rock like the earth
below us. Stable and supporting
of all things. Unlike the water
that comes and goes with the tide
like good times. Nor like the fires
of this land that destroy all it
touches. Yet we was all these
things in some way or another but
we did not stand against the coming
of winds nor the rising waters or
the devestating fires that ravished
us. Our love could not with stand
these acts so it must not have
been love at all.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Scarlett Charlotte 11 April 2009

Does love exist...Or do we create it...Or is that the same thing? Sorry, I'm rather awful with comments, but I like this anyway.

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