Thursday, August 21, 2014

Failed Tribute To The Stonemason Of Tor House, Robinson Jeffers Comments

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We traveled down to see your house,
Tor House, Hawk Tower, in Carmel,
California. It was not quite what
I thought it would be: I wanted it
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James Tate
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Barbara Hall 14 February 2019

Thanks for posting this. I wondered what Tor House was like these days. Boxed in by trillionaires doesn’t sound good. Your “Man is a puny thing... child suppport.” Line doesn’t seem to be relevant here. There are a few other lines I would cut too. I would end the poem at the word “fellows.”

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